• Michel Theriault
    Mike, I can't agree with you more.

    I fought against fluff when I was writing proposals form my past employers, but found even I had to revert to it when we didn't have details, evidence or anything credible to say in response to an answer.

    Then, I started reviewing other proposals for consulting clients and the folly in fluff really hit home. I also recently interviewed an evaluator for my upcoming book "Win More Business ... Write Better Proposals" and what I though was confirmed. She told me that she glossed over the fluff, and if there was something important buried in the fluff, it was missed and too bad for them.

    There is a big difference between effective sales language in a proposal and filler. The filler is fluff. I will be posting a podcast at http://www.howtowinmorebusiness.com on getting the fluff out of your proposal in October, 2009.

    Michel
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